Loretta --
I know I wasn`t asked to r/r/c this, but, I saw that you were looking for opinions in another thread. And so I decided to check it out!
This was a really great poem, short, but really emotional. It held a lot of depth and imagery as well. The wording you chose was great, and the flow was perfect. Great job!! 5/5
No need to return the favor ;; I haven`t got any new poems up yet.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This is a wonderful poem!! Love the way you expressed your feelings about love. I met someone and have been so in love that I decided to write poems. It is just the easiest way of writing down how you feel!! Love you work!

Wow, so romantic, and you made the kiss so tastey,lol.
great job

Very cute love poem... And different from the rest. I'm not sure what else to say but excellent write.. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex

I hope to see you commenting on my poems again; the favor will be returned and I'm apt to put YOU on my favorites list.

Wow.. i loved this one! it was very sweet, but also made me feel a bit hot.. it was passionate and beautiful! nice job 5/5