by Shawna Jun 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
To: Sheest, I love you to death!! |
Omg! love the poem! it reminds me of my best friend! she passed out today at school (u should have seen her arm! she cut her self so bad! she lost so much blood to! she alive thats for sure!) |
This poem is amazing...although it brought back memories and brought tears to my eyes...it was so good. your friend is so lucky to have you and i wish the best for the both of you... GOD BLESS BOTH OF YOU!!! |
by Sara
This is an outstanding poem!! i know that ur friend is safe with you!! you won't let any harm through!!! my best friend used to cut... she gave it up everything from smoking, pills and the razor!!! She said she couldn't have done it without me...so be there for your friend she needs you!!!! |
by Sole
Nice poem. I would like to praise this poem with rhythm, flow, rhyming, meaning. But it seems a little too personal. I hope you're friend has got/is getting through fine! |
Awww that was so sweet!! I can tell you love your sister very much! The overall poem was really good, the rhyming and flow were good. I think what kept me wanting to keep reading it was because of how much emotion you expresed towards your sister. Great job! |