Amazing, It seems like both of you are lucky to have friends like eachother. Cute, and very well written.

A beautiful dedictaion to a wonderful friend!! She is lucky to have someone who will always giver her unconditinal love!! Great write!

Honey thanks so much for this poem. You have no idea how much it means to me. When times seem so rough and it feels as though no one is there, I know I can count on you. You always relate and make everything seem like it has a positive side. thank you so much for caring about me and looking after me. I dont know what I would do without you. I love you beyond death, beyond anything. I miss you more with each coming day, and I wonder if I made a mistake by coming home. I honestly am confused and am still thinking abou coming back. It has nothing to do with you. If I had a choice I would just move you to Salt Lake with me! Your my best friend... I will always look up to you. I love you honey, thanks.
Shalisa

This one is also awesome! It is so descriptive and it has so much emotion in it! Kudos to you, really good work!

Please r/r/c love and new me!!

A beautiful poem. It's good to see you have a nice relationship with your sister. Most girls I know can't stand their sister. Lol, like my sisters always fight. Good stuff, a really nice dedication.

One awesome poem, i loved it, it was strong and positive and i am glad you have someone special like this, keep it up, my friend
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Awww that was so sweet!! I can tell you love your sister very much! The overall poem was really good, the rhyming and flow were good. I think what kept me wanting to keep reading it was because of how much emotion you expresed towards your sister. Great job!

Cayce x

Nice poem. I would like to praise this poem with rhythm, flow, rhyming, meaning. But it seems a little too personal. I hope you're friend has got/is getting through fine!

Peace. [Sole]

This is an outstanding poem!! i know that ur friend is safe with you!! you won't let any harm through!!! my best friend used to cut... she gave it up everything from smoking, pills and the razor!!! She said she couldn't have done it without me...so be there for your friend she needs you!!!!

THIS IS A WONDERFUL POEM 5/5!!!!

This poem is amazing...although it brought back memories and brought tears to my eyes...it was so good. your friend is so lucky to have you and i wish the best for the both of you... GOD BLESS BOTH OF YOU!!!

Omg! love the poem! it reminds me of my best friend! she passed out today at school (u should have seen her arm! she cut her self so bad! she lost so much blood to! she alive thats for sure!)