Our own way of talking

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 30, 2006


Me and eveofcoleman wrote these the first one is mine and the second one his thanks for reading =)

you are heads,
i am tails,
you are happiness,
i am sadness,

i feel lonely,
you feel loved,
you can love,
i can hate,

though all the diffrences,
that we share,
we are friends,
we show we care,

you want to help,
i want to give up,
why wont you let me,
fade away?

i know that its because you care,
but why waste your time,
on someone like me,
am i really worth it?

you said yourself,
im not alone,
and if im not what is this that i feel,
this emptiness inside,

this hole inside,
forever growing,
i feel so lost,
the blood is flowing,

i guess all im asking,
is for someones help,
do you know,
for sure if ill find them,

what if i dont,
im left all alone,
this hole in my heart,
forever consuming,

im lost in the darkness,
you have the light,
how did you find it,
my efforts have all failed,

maybe i will be,
forever this sad,
spending the rest of my life,
helping those that feel bad,

i offer words of wisdom,
to those that cannot find them,
i really do nothing,
but tell them what they know,

so am i really,
worth all your time,
and if i am,
please tell me why,

because i really dont see,
what i am here for,
why depend on me,
when there are others worth more?

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Your lost in the dark....
Im bathed in the light...
I live in happiness...
You live in fright...

You wonder why people care..
If you wanna live or die...
I wonder how you think...
Death is what will allow you to fly...

Cutting is what you do...
Its your way to deal...
All the while wishing...
To feel what i feel..

You wanna give in..
To the pain in your heart...
Im here to make sure...
You dont fall completely apart...

You often ask..
Will i find the one...
And all i say to that...
Is love finds everyone...

Wonder why your worth my time?..
Youve always been there for me...
Why are you worth it?
My friend why cant you see?...

I love you man...
Till the ****ing end...
No matter what goes on...
You are always my best friend..

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  • 18 years ago

    by tearsbehindamask

    It sounds like you would be worth the time.. but i dont think i am.. i know how that is.. it reminds me of a backstab behind the tears...

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work. I really liked this poem, seeing both sides. It makes for a unique and well written poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Aww, that was very sweet. I liked it very much. It makes me think of my and my Ally. She's the light to my darkness, and the love to my hate. I love this poem, and thank you both for sharing it. Love it love it love it! 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    At the beginning I found it was a peculiar, different approach to sadness and depression, then it went back to the dreary way that many poets write on this site, and then your friend's poem burst in and cheered it all completely up. I especially liked these lines

    You often ask..
    Will i find the one...
    And all i say to that...
    Is love finds everyone...

    I can't imagine that you are depressed if you have such a marvelous friend.
    In a way, I was deeply touched, because I have some very happy friends, but I have not shown them how sad and scared I truly am. So yes, it was a brilliant poem, with a heartlifting end.

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I love you man...
    Till the ****ing end...
    No matter what goes on...
    You are always my best friend..

    ^^Really good ending!!

    This was a good poem. But you gotta capitalise your I's lol =P

    But I thought you both did a great job on it. Not a thing I would change, Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

    P.S. Where's my cyber hug? huh? Lmao!