by we_all_live_to_die Jun 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Me and eveofcoleman wrote these the first one is mine and the second one his thanks for reading =) |
It sounds like you would be worth the time.. but i dont think i am.. i know how that is.. it reminds me of a backstab behind the tears... |
by Little Dot
Good work. I really liked this poem, seeing both sides. It makes for a unique and well written poem. |
by RetroRavey
Aww, that was very sweet. I liked it very much. It makes me think of my and my Ally. She's the light to my darkness, and the love to my hate. I love this poem, and thank you both for sharing it. Love it love it love it! 5/5 |
by Truest Lies
At the beginning I found it was a peculiar, different approach to sadness and depression, then it went back to the dreary way that many poets write on this site, and then your friend's poem burst in and cheered it all completely up. I especially liked these lines |
by Natalie
I love you man... |