Comments : Said her last goodbye

  • 18 years ago

    by Dani

    Hey i really like this poem! but its so sad! keep up the gr8 work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by codey

    I really liked this poem. the flow was good
    take care now
    5/5 from me
    [x]o[x]o[x]

  • 18 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    This is really sad, but creative. I really like it. Great work!

  • Hey u really create an image in my mind, great job lov mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    It beautiful..brought a tear 2 my eye..i no how it feel 2 wanna die..hope u dont feel like that..5/5..oh btw -the fall- was a true story..lots of love xoxo love georgia