I really like this poem
keep up the good work
5/5 from me =]

Aww so sad =[
brought me to tears!
you are such an amazing writer! you have amazing talent .
stay strong and keep up the good work =]
5/5
thanks for the comment love =]
Lovelove
Alice
xxxxxxx

The flow had been well as were the words. Thought that the ending might have been a tad stronger but no complaints. Really enjoyed the way that the words brought about some of the vivid images. Really a great piece that reveals talent.
~Faith-less

This is really good. i like the little stroy line behind it. you have talent. thanx for ur comment

Wow this is really powerful. This has to touch anyone who reads it. You described not only the surroundings but the feelings so well. Nicely written dear.

-Kayla

Wow. Thats priceless. Awesome job

That was an amazing poem. i am so speechless. the words flowed, it made perfect sense and it was just downright beautiful. keep up ur writing! its awesome!