Well written, chilling, and sinister.

Daddy, my arms are bleeding
For I cut them with a glass
You weren't there to throw one at me
Still I sat there waiting for pain to pass

This stanza really stood out to me! Very emotional piece...loved the ending...there was some rhyme there which only made the poem better! Keep up the good work!

~D*K~

Sometimes I really hate reading depressing poems like these. I forced myself to read this one because it was greatly written. Another great use of repetition to put power in this poem. Great job.

This poem is heart wrenchingly sad, and though I cannot relate, I feel immense amounts of distress for you. Great work. 5/5

Very heartfelt and powerful poem... the emotions are beautifully penned.... good work..

Im speechless ! amazing work! 5/5