Great poem, u can sense ur emotion when writing it through ur words. my favourite stanza:
"As I dug my grave
So quietly and slow
Feeling the life dripping out of me
Feeling you letting go"
I don't know why, as soon as i read it, i got attached. =D
Keep writing. =)

This is soo sad...
Great emotion...
Great flow...
Good rhyming
Great ending...
Great everything!

My fav stanza:
"As I dug my grave
So quietly and slow
Feeling the life dripping out of me
Feeling you letting go"

Keep it uP!
~D*K~

This has such a melancholic tone and yet its completely beautiful and I know how much stuff like this can hurt. You wrote the words that so many of us feel and to place ourselves in our own little heaven like that...is liberating in a way. We can express what we want, and we can paint the most beautiful image that coincides with our true feelings.

This was so good!