That's sad Darien.

But I really liked it.

No will ever know my life is sliding.
[Think you mean 'no one']

It was really good =) All flowed well and all that shtuff! Tehe. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This poem is very original, the whole idea is pretty cool. It's a little scary and that's good. I feel invisible most of the time, and you described that perfectly. The third stanza was definately my favorite, specially these lines:

Diving deep into a cinematic existence,
Falling and fading off into the distance.

Great job!

XoXo
Gaby

Absolute Masterpiece, perfect flow and everything.

**by the way, it would be nice if you voiced your opinions in the members forum and Feedback one, there's alot of problems going on

Good poem once again. This poem was easy for me to relate to, with the feling of being ignored and not noticed. You did a great job on this.

That is really really sad..but i can relate alot out of all the poems i have read today, this is by far my favorite!!! it was great 5/5

Omg.. wot can i say.. i loved it..
it was a great poem to read.. really sad but was very sincere...

overall it was a 10-10
good job

Awesome poem, my friend! I'm afraid there are many people out there that feel this way. If we could give them a friendly touch or a kind smile and their live would feel more meaning full. Thanks for commenting on my movie poem.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

As alway amazing. you never seem to do any less then that keep it up 5.5

I LOV it. the ending is gr8. that is so deep of depression. i think it's a good sine if ur ignored. no one will bother u. i feel that way alot:)
xoxo

This is a really sad poem. I love it. Keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Hahaha I very much enjoyed this poem ^_^

I almost had a heart attack when I saw the title, well done, I very much like the flow and structure to this poem. Well done.. keep it up ^_^

DA

Rating: 4.8/5
Favorite Line: Magicians could never bring me back,
I've got the greatest disappearing act

Wow---perfect-absolutely perfect! The rhyme and flow are flawless. I like it because the rhyme didnt feel forced at all. The word choice is fantastic and each word makes the poem so much more powerful. Another aspect I like about it is how you have a couple similes in it comparing yourself to other things. You picked a great title for this piece-it really caught my attention-Great write! 5/5 without a doubt----

OMG! I love the wordin to it and it really sends a message out. I love the example too of things that get forgotten or left there very good! 5/5

That was good work! Keep it up!

Hey this is a great poem, the rhyming was great, and it seemed to come from your heart. i hope ur not really like that tho, or else that wud b sad. i think evryone feels like that at a time...5/5....u totally earned it

I love this poem. The rhyming is wonderful. You're an inspiration ^_^

I loved the poem and i love your word choice! it's a sad poem but it really gets the point across keep writing 5/5

Damn I've missed reading... This is the reason why! A damn good right. Deep and sorrowful, but the rhymes and flow is simply superb!

Aww.. that was soo sad! But I like it a lot!! The flow and rhyming were good as always! My favorite lines were also: Magicians could never bring me back,
I've got the greatest disappearing act
Yet another wonderful poem from you! Keep it up!!

Cayce x

Aww.. this was so sad, yet so powerful and strong in its sorrow and sadness.. i reli enjoyed the read.. agen, i love ur rhythm and flow.. and all the words that brought the poem together and the idea to life.. amazing catchy title..
gr8 job, loved it 5/5
take care
NannO