That is very sad, but you wrote it so beautifully. It was very creative. The second stanza was my favorite for some reason, but the poem in a whole was amazing, there's no other word to describe it. Great job on this!

Original, sad and great to get the message out there. Your words seemed rather unusual but when i read back over, each line had its own purpose. Great work yet again.

Great poem! Such emotion. It would be awful to feel like the character in it!! Everyone has someone that notices them, wether they know it or not!! 5/5

Lol I Tried To Vote Twice...
The Second & Third Stanza Had Really Strong And Addictive Metaphors Pilled With Vivid Imagery "I'm like the good apple that got rotten,
Or a crack in the wall left forgotten.
I'm the boy that no one wants to see,
The one they left alone for eternity.

Invisible boy has now left for hiding,
No one will ever know my life is sliding.
Diving deep into a cinematic existence,
Falling and fading off into the distance."

The Theme Of This Poem Was Absolutely Flawless & Perfect, It Reminds Me Of One Of My Favourite Old Songs "Invisible"... I Love The Lyrics To That Song And I Think This Poem Matched It Perfectly...I Dont Have Anything Bad To Say About This Piece 5/5
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Awwww.
thats so sad.
5/5
;(
I like some of the words you used.
made it seem so vivid.
my favourite stanza was:

"Invisible boy has now left for hiding,
No one will ever know my life is sliding.
Diving deep into a cinematic existence,
Falling and fading off into the distance."

It made sense to me.
I guess I'm starting to fade with most of my relatonships.
sorry if I seem vague.
It was great.
~Emah

Awww... this is soooo sad....:( everything flows really well i like the words you chose. i hope you write the poem like this soon~ good job!5/5

Breathtaking...beatuiful...you really captured the emotion...you have a lovely gift...keep it up...I hope one day to be as good as you...felicitations!!!

Wow, I loved this poem!!! My favorite stanza was

Searching for a place where I belong,
Until that day when things went wrong.
My life was suffocated as I was ignored,
I left my pathetic life to be with the Lord.

I loved it!!! I also like the exaple of things that got forgotten or left like Sam said earlier!!! Anyways the flow and rhyme were Perfect!!! Fabulous job, oh and i liked the way you worded the poem!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

Fantastic, though i think i have come to expect that from you. 5/5

Rather sad but loved reading it. It was described well and I got a clear picture of the poem and the message behind it. I think you did a great job and that is my honest opinion. Keep up the great work :D

Awww This Was Really Sad...Yet Good! Brilliant Job And I Should've Known Your Poems Are Amazing...They Just Grab The Reader In! I Love It Yet Another Astounding Poem By You 5/5
Love,
Steph

Was a really good poem. you stayed on topic and moved within it very well its flow was also pretty good. thx for the comment.

~~Retniapdoolb

Deeply sad. Loved it though.

Invisible boy has now left for hiding,
No one will ever know my life is sliding.
Diving deep into a cinematic existence,
Falling and fading off into the distance.

Just adored this stanza.
The whole thing was so beautifully written.

I'm like the good apple that got rotten

I would reword that if I were you.. It seems to take away from the poem a bit.

But otherwise it was a great poem. Strong and dark; the way I like them. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

You're on my favorites, by the way. You're an amazing writer. Take care kiddo.

This is a great poem. It had a clear message, and the flow is incredible.

I loved your aabb rhyming. it was impecable. You are a magician with words.
I love that fact that you don't resort to words I have to look up in the dictionary.. instead you use everyday words.
Thank you for this marvelous piece of work. I'll be looking forward to more like this.
David Velazquez

All i have to say is WWOOOWWW....

Wow.. another great poem! the title really drew me in.. your rhymes worked perfectly and the whole poem flowed very well.. i love the metaphors you use as they add a lot of effect..every line of this poem had meaning and emotion! great job! 5/5

This was so very sad and it showed such depth and emotion behind the words. The flow was great and the imagery perfect. 5/5