Wow-really good poem-I can really tell you poured a lot of your emotions in it and made the poem more powerful--

''And hopes that someone, someday
Will come rescue me from my self inflicted hell.''
I love these two lines and its a staement that says a lot in the
poem about how you feel-somewhat trapped and need to be rescued-they definately madde the poem stronger.

The only break in the flow I found is this line:

''Well that’s because I’ve cried all that they can cry.''
I think it should be ''I've cried all that I can cry'' or ''They've cried all that they can cry''-I dont know it sounds better to me, becuase when I was really it I had to take a double take to make sure I wasnt reading it wrong because it sounded funny. Besides that it was a really good poem! Keep writing and stay strong!----

*Sorry about the site errors in my comment-the line in your poem doesnt have those*

I really liked it at a part there it sounded a little bit bumby but it smoothed out i absolutly adored the last bit
5/5 from me for sure!
take care and keep writting

This is very good.. and I can somewhat relate to it.. Keep up the good work.

This is an amazing poem. I love it. I'm impressed. =]

This was brilliant i flet all your emotions!

Beautiful