They laid you inn my arms all tiny and new
[I think you just mean "in"]
have someone special for you.
[Maybe you could say "I have someone special for you.]

This poem nearly made me cry though. I'm guessing you've written this about a child of yours? Anyway. I thought it was really touching and heartfelt. Any kid/teenager would be lucky to have you as their mother. =) Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This is a heart warming poem with a flawless flow

I am commenting on my own poem because I changed it to publish on here. The original name on the poem was Amanda, she is my daughter. I wrote to and read it to her at her wedding reception. My husband talked me into changing it . He said it was a tribute to her, keep it that way. Thought I should explain

What a beautiful poem
i am speachless
5/5
lana