Awhe, that is sad, I really anjoyed reading it though, the first 6 lines where my favorite part though.

The message is clear and thats important, i liked it

Ah. I like this one.
It rings about forgiveness and true love.very nice.

I can relate to this. I thought it was very good.

Another nice poem!
amazing peace of write!
keep it up!

Another great poem u wrote 5/5

I can relate, and I agree whole-heartdly, With this message. You did a good job, the flow was good, but the word choice could use a little umph. But other than job weel done. Keep writing and I will keep reading. I like your upbeat style. 4/5

Aww.. i love this poem.. simple words but still the message comes acorss with such power.. the only suggestion is to take away the exclamation mark from the end of the last line.. it seems unnecessary :D

I know how you feel/felt in this poem
you did a good job with this
it's a strong poem for you
and I can tell you were going through alot

This is overall a fantastic poem. I Like the wordings and the beautiful flow. The simple mistake I found is a tense prob...that is use of told... it should be tell. But it is 5/5 nevertheless :)

Great message--very true. Now to the poem, same suggestion along with the other poem. There was raw emotion but it could be stronger with a better choice of words and more descriptions.
Hope that helped!

Again this poem is a little bit off I think this may be bacuse of mistakes like this "That ill never told you" should be that ill never tell you. You have many mistakes like this.

It could use a little work the flow is a little bumpy! but great message!

I LOVE this poem, so much emotions,
stirs memories again great poem,
perfect grammer, i give it a 5/5!!!

I like the lesson in this piece, good job. It's true that we should tell the truth to the person we love before it's too late...

Really beautiful poem, except there is a couple of grammatical errors. I loved it though. I felt every expression from this. Great job! 5/5

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