Finger on the trigger

by codey   Jun 30, 2006


Alone in the dark
Deserted park
Gun in hand
There she stands
Street lights flashing
Heart is crashing
Puddle of muck
All out of luck
A beautiful disaster
Faster and faster
Her silent cries
Tears caused by lies
Starting to rain
Needs to stop her pain
Trying to find her place
Make-up running down her face
Sick of living
Time for new beginning
Gun to her head
All those nasty things said
Shouldnt end this way
I wish she would stay
Her decision for the end
This is where her life had led
Last second to change her mind
Peace she must find
Body shaking
Dream of never waking

Loud gunshot heard throughout that park
She died that night all alone in the dark

Body drowning in a pool of blood
She was already drowning in a flood
Such a tragedy to see her die
Now its time for her soul to fly
Shes the saddest little angle
Mascara running down her face
Maybe now she will find her place.

+can people please vote/comment on this poem it would mean alot to me thank you =[+

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  • 18 years ago

    by hayley

    Emotional....and i feel that poem with all my heart

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow.. nice one...
    painfilled
    emotionfilled
    lovely
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Joyo

    Hello. It was very expressive, and the situation was writed very clear and good. VERY good work! have a nice day!! ;) 5/5