I AM THE FIRST TO WRITE A COMMENT! Anyway...THIS WAS SO GOOD! Its everything I want. If this is what you have then don't lose it. THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOO GREAT! I LOVED IT! Great Job! Take care

Its really good. i can feel the love you used for your poem. great stuff

I really liked that one to. lol you are very good at righting poems dont give up on them

I do got to addmit you can write good poems I feel you on this one

WoW Lissa! Thats so sweet, cute and absoulty awesome! Your baby is one lucky person! Such a beautiful writer. Hope to hear more of you.

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Very well done

timehealsallwounds*

Awwwwwe!
I loved this!!
You're such a poet!

LOVE YOU!
Lolli xx

You have a passion like no other
this poem was great
just like all your others
its no new news
your a great poet
5/5
~MF~

Your really good at writing love poems, keep it up

I also Love this one it will also be me and my baby Ray forever and always lol i love him soo much but yea i love the poem....

Robin

I'll say this again. I wish someone would write a thing like that to me.