Thinking of You

by Jessica   Jun 30, 2006


When I looked at you
I went through
Even though i loved you
I just couln't take you
i felt like sh*t
I just couln't do it
I loved you so much
I was so touched
Surprise,surprise
You may rise
With this touch of mine
Or the peace of mind

this poem is dedicated to Chase

i know it isn't the best but it is my 1st poem so please rate it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    BY the way happy two year anniversary on this poem! you say it is your first
    It was good , and yet you have realy improved.
    KEEP SHARING WHAT YOU WRITE

    6 /30 /06---6 /30 /08

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    A simple poem of self expression
    well expressed. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by timothy

    Im sorry that was so great

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