The demons curse..

by XcalibuR   Jun 30, 2006


I traveled through the gates of hell
accompanied by the demon hades
He grabbed my soul and made me yell
so then he gave me rabies

I screamed and yelled in horrific pain
Then i took my sword and he was slain

i walked out the gates a free man again
i got no parade or even a cheer

all i got was diseased man leer i wondered and thought what is so bad

i went in the corner and cried for my dad
but no one came i had realized he'd flown

and then i looked down and a tail had grown

The demons curse will live on through space

spreading and leaving without a trace...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Loved loved loved your poem. i could picture everything that was going on in my head. awesome. i like the detail to it. i wouldnt' change a thing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    Hey, i really liked this, agree with both other comments before, it created great images in my mind! i would give atleast 4, defs shd be higher than 3. good work,

  • 18 years ago

    by C

    I agree with Charles it is lyke a small tale n did get some what comfuzin in the middle but far from that,it wus a nice poem B)

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles OConnor

    Very nice poem. Almost a small tale, loved the ending...4.0, due to the fact that in the middle I became confused with what you were saying but other than that you have At talent and I wish to see more of it in the future.

    charles "In everything I am an outsider"-H.P. Lovecraft.

    authorsden.com/charlesdoconnor check it out;)

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