Worst poem? Where's your best then, because I'd really like to see it. This was a very cute, nice poem.
In places, it seemed a little, hum, maybe invented, that someone got heartbroken, but then hit with realization so quickly, or maybe it's just me, but anyway, I liked it, even though any love in my life has always been onesided.

//T.L.//

I actually enjoyed it, it was well worded and was quite sweet
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This was such a touching and well writen poem.
"i will love you till the sky falls down
And my body lies far under ground
I know that we should have moved on
But I am lost without you when you're gone"
i just loved that stanza what a great end to a great poem well done

How was this your worst poem???? It was amazing! It was unbelievably full of emotion that you expressed sooo well---- definately 5/5!!

Um definantly wasnt the worst peom ive read..i enjoyed it. i like dhte second to last stanza.

Hey i luv ur poem it touch me n tru that 5/5 keep it on read some of my poems too

Sweetie, if this was your worst poem then I don't think you would have gotten quite so many comments on it anyways, I truely believe that noones poems are really bad! You keep writing cuz I really enjoyed this poem! Thanks for sharing!

I LOVE IT.. ITS SO PERFECT!!