Awesome job!! it's so sweet and true. i know how you feel. when i first met my boyfriend, he had a girl. i then moved out of town and didn't see him for a while. but it all worked out in the end. i'm sure it will for you too.
keep up the great work!!

How touching...it was gripping through out. one suggestion however would be to try an remove some of the cliches used....maybe you can re read it and it would be evident to you....but i really liked it...the emotional flow was perfect...not spoken to you in sometime mate...hope youre fine...dhaval