Awesome hun!! many, including myself, don't take the time to think about how others also have pasts... love it! take care,
-xXx-

It has a good story, not very descriptive, but it's one of those types of poems.

Some poems tell a story, first person, and some tell it third person. This one is third person, that removes space for adjectives, personally, I prefer to write first person poetry, but I read either. Anyways, that was a huge run-on sentence, and I am getting way-off topic.

Good job, I like how you were making the point that a lot of people have it the same, or worse.

I soooooo loved it.... i loved every line, every word... it was so emotional... i really liked how you potrayed life's hidden truths in this poem... it's just great....
keep up the good work.... 5.5

Much Love,
Ipsita

This was a neat idea, never read anything like it before, it had a nice point like dont assume your the only one whos ever felt bad or gone through hard times because everyone has....5./5

I really, really like this poem, the way you just dismiss some people, but their past could be your present. And they know a lot more than you think. brilliantly written poem, the flow left the reader guessing more than the poem ever let on.