Wow, beautiful, breathtaking poem. It is so true and wonderfully written. I wish more people would open their eyes to this aspect. Keep up your great work!

Yes, I guess that the good poets are leaving because they have had enough, and indeed, there is a lot of depression here, which generally makes one depressed.
Anyway, the poem contained a lot of very beautiful words, and I could sense your anger at the destruction of this site. If I was you I would stay on and help replace the good poets who have left.

//T.L.//

I really like the flow of this poem. Its a poem about a bleak furture,its honest about the times we live in

I liked this poem. I liked who you repeated the first stanza again at the end. Your poem has a good point, this world is becoming a dark place to be with all the hate and no trust in one another.

I think that the stanzas needed to connect more with one another but the overall positioning of the reader was good. The language was well used however sometimes seemed overly focused on the rhymes. A good job, keep it up.

Breath taking poem, great how you ended with the first stanza again. perfect flow, great job
xxALLYxx

Great poem. It flowed well and i liked the repetion of the first stanza. Strong message with strong words. Well done.

Wow, "A brotherhood of poetry passion
Drifting off in silent dust
Art replaced by arising tension
Losing all oldtime trust

False messages posted in hate
Feelings lingering on thin ice
Opinions rise with a futile fate
Veils engulf our pleading cries"

You Couldn't Be More Right, People Have Lost The True Meaning Of What This Site & Writing Poetry Is All About...But Its Obvious You Haven't, Because Your Poems Are Still Breathtakingly Beautiful 5/5 xoox-Nikki-xoxo

I really liked this poem...It's very unquie (Sp?) and it flows quiet nicely...Good job.

xDarkSuicidex

I liked this one a lot......I normally dont like rhyming poetry, becauase normally it seems to take away from the poem! But in this case it added so much more to it! Awesome!

Wow....this was really amazing...great job

Heyy! That was a great poem! How old are u anyway? ur amazing! i read that one about the children of the world that one was really great! Keep on writing!
{*LACEY*}

The title is so catchy..as the words in beautiful arrays of thought provoking lines.