This is really great...I love it soo much!!!!!!

jessie

I've been through that, I know how that feels, and I think your poem expressed it so well. This is a sad poem but it still is cute. I really liked it entirely.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

It almost made me cry...I have been in that situation...and its Hard...but it was amazing..Great Write...
Emma 5/5

Hey! its a beautiful poem..ive been through the same thing...it does hurt i agree! and it feels like the worst thing ever! hope your ok! great poem! XoBrittoX

Very good. Actually loved it, I know I've been there. I always remember the thought that may comfort you "the pretty ones are always selfish in bed" in this case if he left you, I hope its true.lol awesome

Hey wow

now m speachless
all your poems i am attached to

you are one great and beautiful writer

loved it 5/5

I've been feeling the same thing too. even thow i act like i don't and in one of my poem i told him to love him more then i he loves me, but it's hard.

I really like this poem keep up the good work

Awesome work! I can relate to this piece. Great emotion. Keep up the good work! =)

-*La Little Lor Lor*

Very nice i love it keep up the good work!!

timehealsallwounds*

Amazing. The connection is super-strong between me and the poem. That is my situation. I had a girl steal my guy, and it hurts,
good on ya

Wow.. This poem is great keep them coming girl.. you got alot.. of potential

That was awesome! I've been through the same thing. Keep writing! Comment my poems sometime. : )

Hunny, absolutely brilliant... i loved it. keep it upp, your work is amazing.

heidi may

Th is is really great. i loved it. keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Aww omg i frikking love this poem sooo much!! its wonderful and i can relate to this sooo much. wow amazing job writing it. its sad but beautifuly written. you have talent. dont ever stop writing!! 5/5