Wow.. I enjoyed it. I loved how you wrote it, very unique. There was so much emotion put into this. The flow was pretty good.

What just happened?
Did I fall for you?
Does that look mean anything?
Are you still in love with her?
^^ I love this stanza, because I can relate to it so well. Great job! 5/5

The flow is a little off though I like the thought of the poem! Umm I think you should go on longer give more feelings.....it was not near long enough

I agree the flow is a little off but the repetition and continuos asking of questions made for a very effectve style. i really liked it and can definately relate
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Good work. I really liked this poem. I like repetition of What just happened?
'Why did yo kiss me if you didn't mean it?'
I think you might have meant you instead of yo.