Great job. Good use of metaphors. I thought this was very well done and easy for me to relate to. The feeling of always being alone and left out in the cold suffering.

OMG, wow! I'm speechless, that was so beautiful! So beautiful and sad, and related to me! I could feel the coldness through the words, the sense of lonliness and the longings. Excellent poem! I loved the metaphors and imagery! Keep up your great work! 5/5

Wow. That was amazing. I really liked the metaphors and that I could relate to the poem. It's really incredible how you can almost feel the lonliness and longing just from reading the poem. Great Job, really great.

T.L. --
WoW. This was definitely a different kind of poem ;; I don`t believe I`ve ever read one quite like this. But, that`s a good thing, because I loved it. The flow, for one, was perfect. I couldn`t figure out the rhyming pattern, if there was one, but what did rhyme seemed good too. =D
Much thanks for your comment on my poems ;; meant a lot. I actually rewrote that song last night as a duet ;; but I`m not sure if I`ll post it on P&Q.
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

Great Job!!! I ABSOBLUTELY LOVED the 2nd stanza:

Sometimes there are tears,
And sometimes laughs,
Sometimes there is a maze,
Other times clear-cut paths.
How am I to decide,
What I want to be?
Does anyone know me enough,
To be able to decide for me?

I loved the way you word your poems it makes it where you can paint a picture of it in your mind!!! Flow and Rhyme were wonderful!!! 5/5!!