Don't Cry Little Girl

by Shawna   Jul 1, 2006


Don't cry little girl
Daddy does love you
And it hurts him the most
When he turns you black and blue

Don't cry little girl
I'm sorry for the pain
But daddy had to teach you
Not to play with his gold chain

Don't cry little girl
Everything will be all right
It's because your daddy loves you
He sneaks in your room at night

Don't cry little girl
You must act brave and proud
You see you made me do it
You were playing way too loud

Don't cry little girl
She whispered to herself
As she reached for the gun
And got the bullets off the shelf

Don't cry little girl
The gun trembling in her hand
Her finger on the trigger
As she helped him understand

This little girl won't cry
Not anymore after today
You see I have to make it stop
And now I've figured out a way

Don't cry little girl
Is what you've always said
So it should make you happy,
Now I won't, because you're dead!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Awesome poetry. That really made me feel for the young girl in the poem, its sad that kids have to go through abuse, and you portrayed that depth and depression excellently.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow! The ending suprised me! Lol. The rhyming and flow to the poem were pretty good. It was soo sad. Excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    *Standing Ovation* Woot Woot! Thats What I'm Talking About, Its About Time We See a Poem About An Abused Victim That Fights Back...Its a Rare Accurance But Always Satisfiying To Read Expecially When The Authors Talanted 5/5 All The Way!
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was very sad, and it really brought reality into place, keep writing because i loved this poem and would love to read more
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Such a sad story... Love the flow and pace of the poem... good write. 5/5

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