Tammie,
Lol, I think you`re the girl I`ve been PMing. But anyway, I think this is a very good and well thought out poem. Great job.

**Samantha Hollywood

It was very well written the words flowed easy! but yet confused! but it was really good keep it up!

A few months back i could relate to the still loving someone who didn't love you back and longing for them intensely, i liked this poem it conveyed a lot of emotion. If you still feel like this, trust me, it WILL get better, it just takes time.

Oh tammie. the ending, so sad. yet powerful at the same time. it would have hurt knowing this. having this happen to you.

5/5 from your friend always. david