This is so beautifully heartfelt and emotional. I felt every word so powerfully as I read this. It flowed nicely, and sent your message across. I can relate. Thank you for your comment on my poem and keep up your good work! 5/5

I am glad you are blessed to live the life you want to
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I love this part.
idk, it just felt so right! to wish him good luck even when you're hurting deep inside! I guess this means sth to me =)

good work on this one honey!
Keep it up
I'll be waiting for new ones ;)
Luv U
NemO xxxxxx

This was beautiful
i really enjoyed reading it
you write from your sole
i loved it

5/5
lana

WOW - i am shocked. this is one of THE most beautifully written poems i have read a very long time! everything fits so well, the words, the phrases...everything. perfect. some spelling mistakes popped up in some places but i was too busy enjoying your poem to not fully be critical, sorry - i love it so much - one of your best. i love the 'not a goodbye just a chapter closing in on us' bit, so many people will be able to relate to this - i know i can, awsome writting - never stop!

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