Save me

by Paul   Jul 1, 2006


The rose cries a tear,
I sigh a breath,
There's nothing more we share,
I'm helpless in distress,

Floating through sorrow alone,
No one trying to pull me out,
You are not the light I was shown,
Your faith is what I doubt,

More lonely than a planet,
Trapped in solus I remain,
This life, I can't stand it,
Please, free me from this pain,

I don't see how I'm here,
I gave all I had,
There's nothing more I fear,
Because I've experienced all the bad,

I'm living off of false hope,
Starving myself to survive,
All I have to do is grab a rope,
Hold my breath and count to five,

Save me from myself,
Before I end this dream,
My life is on a shelf,
And you don't care it seems,

Goodbye, goodbye, once again,
This time will be the last,
I will comit the ultimate sin,
To free me from this spell you've cast.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Paul, I'm having trouble contacting you. And I am extremely worried. I'm totally in tears. I HAVE TO TALK TO YOU!

    If you read this (and I hope you do), please contact me.

    My old email adres is no longer available, since I have not been able to get on it until now. Because of the "moving out" and bla bla. I did not have connection to the internet until now.

    I have a new email adres. please contact me on this adres;

    Upon_our_mountain@hotmail.com

    Somehow I can't manage to send you an email, it will return back.

    As soon as possible please, I'm dying so worried.

    ** You were walking backwards**

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    O.o this is kinda darkish. Ai very powerfull.. painfull I should say. Wow.. speechless.

    Beautifully written once again.

    Urgh, so many things I could say, and still I can't find the words for it.

    So ye forgive me, haha

    Lotsaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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