This poem is okay, but I've seen that you can do better than this. It feels weaker than the others, but I can't place it exactly. Like it's lacking the emotion needed.
But that doesn't make it bad in my opinion. Losing a dear friend is one of the most painful things ever to happen, so even though I don't feel enough emotion in this, I will still say it did make me think about a close friend I've not spoken to for years - and thank you for that. x