Aww.. Thats really sad..
It really has so much feal to it..
I love how you said "She couldn't keep the butterfly in"

Awsome poem.. Looking foward to reading some more..
5/5

Very good...nice detail and flow was great..check ur spelling and overall i liked it alot...
love ya lots,
sore

I liked the way your poem was arrange and also its content.. I also liked the emotions that has been put on it... keep up the good work...

Wow. Just, wow.
xxx

Sad. Very sad poem that I can relate to in a few ways, Great flow and choice of wording. You've got talent, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This one really hits close to home
...it gave me the chills.

but it is beautifully written
well done.
5/5