Cold

by lonelynow   Jul 1, 2006


She sits, face blank
Staring at the wall
Maybe when she wakes up
She'll forget it all
Eyes wide, mouth open
She breathes in and out
Remembers how it started
Breathes what it's about
She doesn't think; she doesn't speak
They do that for her
She doesn't smile; she doesn't weep
Deep down she doesn't care
They gave her wisdom beyond her years
And she isn't very old
She's just a child, innocent
And all she feels is cold

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lonelynow x x x

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job dudette. I liked this 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. It was excellent the whole way through. the rhyming was good too.

    && thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    GR8 poem! u got a gr8 rythme for it. the emotions r vey deep. i feel like around my family. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenSoul

    Omgosh Another great poem..
    I really loved that, it had so much feal to it..
    It's like there's a musical note in every word.. That put's together a totally awsome song..
    Well done
    5/5 again

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