by Angel_Slayer Jul 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Death is but a heart beat away, |
by anthony cook
Pritty cool...and who gives a **** about spelling gez any 1 would think this was a spelling bee... well done VERY sad...:-( well done |
by The_Dooksta
Makes me cry everytime i read it... |
by The_Dooksta
Dont diss the man...his poems are from the heart.. andree u rock.. |
Some spelling errors and maybe a line or two that didn't quite go with the rest. But well it had been quite good. It really had this hook that made it worth reading. Some nice words and some cool lines that just stood out. Really looks like you're going to produce some really cool pieces. Imagery was awesome because it had this vivid intensity that was really used to the best advantage. Great job. |
by dead girl
Hey andree, great poem. i loved it, you expressed yourself so truthfully.best wishes,dannielle |