I love this poem because it actually made me smile at the end. :)

Really lovely, expressive and touching, i really enjoyed reading it x

Awwwwwwwwwh. 5/5

Hi sweet.
"Dancing on an ocean
Or floating in the air"

Yep in Love everything is possible..

God Bless u Kabs!
;-)

Another nice peace of poem!
love the way you write your poems
amazing!

That was sweet. It made me smile at the end. Well written, nice flow, good word choice, excellently done. 5/5

Aww.. this is the cutest poem ever.. very simple but still adorable

thisis my favorite line "Time is of the essence
Whenever you are near "

Good job even though it's a really old poem
i loved it
wonderfull

Wow this is another superb poem. I like the total poem. Great work keep it up.

I love this piece it flows beautifully and the ending left me speechless this is truly breathtaking.

I love this piece it flows beautifully and the ending left me speechless this is truly breathtaking.

Capitalize the " i " in the title,
And the " y " in the poem,
Another great poem though,
It a perfect 5/5!!!

I absolutely love this poem. It's really good. Great job. 5/5

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