Barely Breathing...

by Neil   Jul 1, 2006


Barely Breathing, Good bye's were said
Turning off My Machine, Fading away.
My Heart Slowly Slowing down.
Passing Out, I fell to my Knees.

I close my eyes, Falling Apart.
I Feel Tears Going Down My Frown,
Knowing that I am Losing You, My Love.
Slowly Dying, I Lose consciousness.

Waking Up, I see The light
Wondering If I should follow or Not
Seeing doctors, family and friends.
Feeling weak and weary crying tears

Screaming your name.
I Love you.
I'm Fading away with out you
Please Come back, I need you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Hey hun...just wanted to say HEY and that im doin good....i like this dude Kyle and all that good shit...my comp. is down but i should be gettin it sooon....umm...i hope everything is goin good! I LOVE YOU
    talk to you soon!!!
    Oxo Laura Marie aka Sweets

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Hey hun...just wanted to say HEY and that im doin good....i like this dude Kyle and all that good shit...my comp. is down but i should be gettin it sooon....umm...i hope everything is goin good! I LOVE YOU
    talk to you soon!!!
    Oxo Laura Marie aka Sweets

  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    HEY NEIL HOW YOU BEEN WELL I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM BUT ITS REALLY SAD =( IM HERE IF YOU NEED ME OK LOVE YOU MWAH
    ALWAYS NATALIE

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hey neily j
    5/5
    so very sad
    im here buddy
    :)
    `Emah

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