That was really good... Your very talented!

I thought this was a very, very well-written poem, although the capitals on every word and the '&&'s detract from the overall success of the poem.

Other than that, your EXTREMELY talented, well done!

Ooh! iu love the poem! its just like one i wrote! and youve described the emotion perfectly once again. i like all the death images and everything. its sooo like the poem i wrote! and with it being an on the spot pissed off ramble. a fantastic poem!
xxx

This is exactly how i feel
you took the words out of my mouth
so powerful and so true
keep up the good work

xx shaylee xx