Emotional Landslide [Sedoka]

by Natalie   Jul 1, 2006


Desirable love,
I'm incomplete without it.
It burns a hole in my heart.

Becoming stronger,
Falling into the quick sand.
An emotional landslide.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of
two three-line katauta with the following syllable
counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    Good job ..

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    This is great!! it is nice and short and to the point!!

    ~shanny~

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    You wrote a really to the point piece in such few words and very bound structure. Great job, you're a great poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by not a poet

    Beautiful! love the form poetry writes! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by *_Clara_*

    I loved it
    keep it up : )

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