I really liked that, the scheme was okay, it was nice
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This poem flows perfectly in this format style and really hits its mark in expressing emotion I LOVE IT

Beautifully portrayed talent, as usual Natalie. Reading your poetry is my utmost pleasure. Keep up your great work, I loved the new and unique style of this one you tried out. 5/5

I have a soft spot for short but explosive poems, very well written, nice how you managed to bring so much emotion into so few words.

Well done
/Bluey

Wow.. that is really good! The wording that you used was perfect. I usually put my favorite part, but I'd have to put the whole poem! lol. Great job on this. You've got some amazing talent! :) Keep it up! 5/5

Wow, this is the prime example of "short but sweet" This was really good. Even the the words were limited, the meaning never faulted. Great job. 5/5.

Frank.

I love this poem, you're a really talented writer 5/5 xx

Wow, i really like this style of writing, i may try to someday.I really loved your choice of words, good job, keep it up

I like this style of a poem! You did a really great job with it-all the lines made the poem stronger and more powerful, you were able to say what you wanted to in only a few lines and that definately takes talent! Great work! 5/5

I really liked your poem. It gets to the heart of the matter

This really was a wonderfully Written poem, Short Sweet and to the point, I realy liked the way you wrote it, it gave it spice, that makes people read it a second time!

Interesting. I'm not too familiar with this type of poetry, but it's def. very deep and full of emotion. Beautiful write.

5/5

joy*:.xx

Really nice. Never heard of that, but i did like it. It's a really neat comparison or symbol that you used, emotional landslide.. nice work

5/5

I really liked it! I'm not sure if I could do a poem like this. It was really good though! 5/5

Cayce

Nice and real short one. don't know much about this style but creativity is always welcomed. good work.

I like that this is short and to the point its rly good. 5/5 keep up the good work

Hey! you did that for my contest! cool, nice job

Talee--
I like this. All I have to say it that you`re very first line doesn`t fit the pattern of a Sedoka as it is 6 syllables long =D
Great work!!

**Samantha Hollywood

Thanks Samantha.

But it is 5 syllables.

De-si-ra-ble love = 5 =)

Oh, really nice! Just like Haiku 5/7/5 but longer though! It is well written! Also you got a lot of poems that is nicely done!