So Close to Reality

by Bridgette   Jul 1, 2006


I watch you stare at her
With that twinkle in your eye
I feel my emotions stir
As I stifle back my cry

You said to her 'I love you'
And I felt myself go weak
I told myself it wasn't true
As you kissed her on her cheek

I tried my best to look away
But my gaze refused to shift
I knew I shouldn't stay
But my feet I couldn't lift

My alarm clock quickly woke me
I dreamed of you and her again
Something I just hate to see
But I know it won't be the end.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxxxxxxmary

    Lol aww.. This is good.. wow you are soo going on my favorites

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Awww sweetness
    this is very wonderful!
    great piece of work
    you did a wonderful job..all the words were perfectly chosen and the flow of rhyme was amazinf~~
    I think I've never read your poetry, its my 1st time so I'll try to read others soon =)
    Keep it up
    Wish you good Luck
    NemO xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Louis Joseph

    I like that

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    Wow

    i really liked this poem
    it was very touching
    ive been in that place of my life too
    you be strong to get though it
    life does get better even though you feel it doesnt

    5/5
    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Nada

    The theme of this poem is great, i like the concept and how everything flowed together and how you organized it... keep up the good wrk!!!

Read All Comments (9)

More Poems By Bridgette