Gr8 poem
sadly it's true. very sweet ending:)

I liked the whole idea of this poem, I know what you mean. I think I've written some poems about that, and I can relate to it. My favorite lines were the first ones.

I think in this line you meant strife:

Everyones happy and life well there is no stife.

Good job! 5/5

XoXo
Gaby