Comments : Xox The Sun xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    I really like this poem and how u explain things it is really nice ... lol about the whole boyfriend thing i toally knew wat u where sayin lol and dont worry about it i have my blonde monments too lol anyways keep yup the good work :)
    take care
    xoxo
    robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by ur green eyez babygirl

    Omg!!!!!! i love this poem.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww..pretty! the imagery in this was beautiful.. the flow could be improved but the beauty of the descriptions hides it.. nice job! 5/5