Wow.. i really like the way that you did this. Great job on this! Keep it up :)

That thought challeneged me... very interesting. To see how far you can push the limits of sercrets before all the lies are found out. Good work!

Like it... 5/5

I really like you're take on things. You have thought about it from a different angle. I like that! Great poem, very well written!

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