Desire (Haiku)

Simple statement said in a simple poem loved it the easiest way to just say what you feel nice job.

Wow short yet great vocab. u worked it well. 5/5

WOW! I love this haiku, and even though the second and third line is some-what repetitive you're making a point and clearly showing what it is. Also, you stated it in different ways. Also, I like how you put in words that were "big words"-made it stronger in my opinion--- Love it [no matter what anyone else thinks] 5/5!! Keep it up

Fantastic word usage.

I don't care what anyone says. I liked it. You bent the rules in some places, but it wouldn't be as good if you hadn't.

-ifihide11