A Melancholic Melody

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Jul 1, 2006


Trees dance with the wind's rythmn.
The sun casts its shadow onto the pavement.
A fountain's melody breaks the silence.
Peaceful.

As the day moves on, the atmosphere shifts.
The trees follow the wind's melancholy.
The sun slowly dissapears behind a somber mass.
The fountain melody is no longer heard
Through nature's apparent dismal temper.

The skies sing their mournful song,
As the melancholic clouds weep.
The wind's anger emphasises nature's concert.
A lugubrious symphony.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Very poweful i love the choice of words
    good strong poem
    nice work
    haha and yes. i mean through haha
    but this was a very good poem
    you havent lost your touch

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
    Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    NIce. very deep. i like.

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    I didnt understand the word lugubrious lol but otherwise its brilliant xxx

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