What's Wrong With Me?

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jul 2, 2006


Well, for starters? I'm very fat.
My Clothes? Always covered in hair of cat.
I have a dumb laugh that annoys,
And I'm unloved by all the boys.

I'm unlucky, each wish I make,
Another break my heart has to take.
Everything's opposite, each thing i dread,
Ends up happening, and it's not just in my head.

Boy I like? Won't deal with me.
Say they vomit each time its me they see.
They call me a sight for sore eyes.
Call me this, then cover up with lies.

Liars and backstabbers. My life contains these,
I want some happiness...please?
What's wrong with me? Way too much,
All I want is love. PLEASE? Just a touch?

~*Who Cares*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Loved the message in this poem and can totally relate the rhyme was a bit forced maybe would have been better without rhyme at all but still a fantastic poem

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    "getting low votes for a scream that has been made from a heart...its just so cruel"
    i dont know if its an imagination or a fact...but i myself could relate to some of the part and it does hurt...really badly.

    really liked the way u presented it...u r amazing

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awwwww....This Poem...Its So True...I Can Relate To It A Lot...It Makes Me Cry....5/5 Amazing...Flow...And Amazing Amount Of Emotion... If You Ever Need Anyone To Talk To Aim;XxDarklight08Xx
    Msn:Xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx@hotmail.com...
    Love,
    Stephanie*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*

  • 18 years ago

    by tori UNK

    That was actually pretty good.
    4/5

    oh and thanks for all the comments and ratings.
    i havnt been on much.
    and i've been in summerschool for a while and ive been working on the other 2 scripts.
    so i'll put em up soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Lol sorry ^^^ *words not wors :D

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