I loved this poem because I can really relate to it. I feel the same way :(
Anyway your poem was well written, good choice of wors, and flowed perfectly. Great job
5/5

Lol sorry ^^^ *words not wors :D

That was actually pretty good.
4/5

oh and thanks for all the comments and ratings.
i havnt been on much.
and i've been in summerschool for a while and ive been working on the other 2 scripts.
so i'll put em up soon.

Awwwww....This Poem...Its So True...I Can Relate To It A Lot...It Makes Me Cry....5/5 Amazing...Flow...And Amazing Amount Of Emotion... If You Ever Need Anyone To Talk To Aim;XxDarklight08Xx
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Love,
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"getting low votes for a scream that has been made from a heart...its just so cruel"
i dont know if its an imagination or a fact...but i myself could relate to some of the part and it does hurt...really badly.

really liked the way u presented it...u r amazing

all the best and take care
5/5

Loved the message in this poem and can totally relate the rhyme was a bit forced maybe would have been better without rhyme at all but still a fantastic poem