That was such a beautiful poem. I loved it. It was so well written, flowed perfectly, and you had a great choice of words. Good job I look forward to reading more of your poems.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

Every Stanza Bled Perfection From a Heart Thats Sincere About Poetry, I Find Myself In-Love With Your Words And Mesmorized By Your Format....You Are a Talanted Poet With Alot Of Potential & Awesome Poetry I Look Forward To Reading More Of *Smooches* 5/5
Nikki-
xoxo

Very awesome poem =)

It was such a sad/dark one. And, I loved it. Especially the last stanza. That was a great way to end the poem. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This is such an amazing poem =D
You are really talented.
5/5
But yeah i guess everyone says it =D
If you ever want to talk.
=]

kaytie.xx

You started it perfect. you drew me in and i just had to keep reading and you ended it just as good! I really loved it! Im looking forward to see more of you!

Amberinaa*

Wow ok apperantly u were mad at some1 but it made for an awesome poem xD good job 5/5

This piece flowed really well, and i really like your wording in this poem.
i dont really know what else to say because there's nothing bad in this piece.

you've got a good talent keep up the good work.

i voted 5/5 4 ya

This one gives me an eerie feeling. Good use of imagery.

5/5

joy*:.xx

Wow great feeling and it was very dark......5/5

Steph -- this is really good! I liked it.. the rhymes and rhythm all flowed really smoothly, and it was easy to comprehend. I think it was great!
Keep it up! =D
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Nice job, you can still add more imagery to relate to the title more

Great poem-really dark and deep. Extremely well written. I love this stanza:

''Tear apart my skin,
A desperate plea in haste,
I will stare back you,
A gaze of disgusted hate,''

I like the rhyme that you added into the poem-It wasnt overdone or forced at all----Great write-----Definately a 5/5

Wow.. i love this poem. It's so well written. My absolute favorite stanza was:
Tear apart my skin,
A desperate plea in haste,
I will stare back you,
A gaze of disgusted hate,
I loved that stanza for some reason, it flowed perfectly and the rhyming was pure flawless, all throughout the poem. Great job on this! 5/5

Awesome!! this poem is great and the rhymes flowed really well!! i like the words you used for description! keep it up!! 5/5!!!