Comments : The Light

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Well, this is suppost to be continued from my original poem, The Dark. This one is suppost to be part of a story, as well as the dark. Plz comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This seemed to have a lot of light.
    It made me feel good about being me and not worry about dramas and whatever else.

    It's a pleasant piece each stanza was like bliss to read.
    5/5
    ~Emah