This one I loved too:)

I have made a few tiny changes to make it stand out even more imo. I hope you apprecciate my input.
Keep writing, you have talent!

5/5 Ingrid

Loving him with my life is all I could do.
One memory, one love, one heart.
The two of us could have made it.
The world spins as we fall apart.
As long as its spinning I cannot hold on.
Dreams and memory fade away.
Nothing can change the fact that I'm losing you.
And now I'm losing myself.
We'll never past each other, we'll drift.
Now I'm Holding on to the little pieces of you.
Hope this isn't the last time.
Let me dream,
dream of you one last time.