Comments : Helpless

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Cute poem with many romantic jests

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Those arms of your's are making me
    Too weak to let you go.
    [I really liked how you worded those lines!]
    The last stanza put the cherry on top and strengthened the poem. I thought it was pretty good. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by cYc

    *blush* thnkx guyz if you like it! I'm really honored! *bow*