Wow---thats fantastic---Im speechles....Brilliant flow and really....hmm....i cant think of the word....mysterious?...mystifying?... anyway-amazing! 5/5

The drummer boy has stopped,
The harp is now to sing,
Drummer boy sits down to cry,
What will my future bring?

how good is that
5/5

Great work, I actually understand this one :P.

ttyl babe
Matt

Very sinister, i enjoyed it thoroughly. love ya Em.
sleep well, heh heh heh
-snoo

Incredible use of language, with a near-perfect rhythm. A few areas through it off, for example:
I look into the furnished room,
And see but empty chairs,
Closed blinds and hearts,
I guess no one should care,

The 3rd line seems slightly too short.

Other than very minor parts, this is excellent. Great poem

Sarah White

This is good but im a guy u left a comment on my poem I NEEDED YOU. and said that i was doing this all for a guy well actually i was doing it for a girl im not gay and i wasnt doing it for a guy. but thanks anyways for the comment.

Jay Jay

p.s. im a male

Excellent! Your work is so original, and it is so good! I really like it and I don't know anything else I can say!

Please r/r/c life vs I, and here i am!
thanks
-ann

I thought the poem was excellent. The flow and rhymes were good.

The only thing was, I didn't like the title, but then again, that's just me :)

Wow!! the words flowed really well and i liked it!! good job!! 5/5
thank you for the comment you left!!

This is really good...
You're very alented, I can relate to this feeling, it sux to feel that way....
Keep writing, I look forward to more!

love
tina
< 33

Its really creative and weird and i like it

Honestly I have difficulty finding anything to critique here. Fantastic. :)

Oh my goodness, such a powerful poem. I loved it, it flowed perfectly.

"For I'm forgetting to forget"

I fcuking absolutely loved that line! It really captivated me. It was a tad contradicting to itself, but that's part of what I truly enjoyed about it. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Great poem. The flow was excellent and it showed alot of emotion.
The rhyming wasnt forced either.
Thanks for the comment.
Good job 5/5

Hmm...I don't know if it was better than the others or not, but it was certainly a good poem. Five and six were my favorite stanzas, manily because of a brillaint line in each 'For I'm forgetting to forget' and 'What will my future bring', but also because of their flow and rhythm. There were other lines I liked, but none as much as ''For I'm forgetting to forget', that was pure brillaince in my opinion.

Brad